Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Creative writing - Doom's day

 The genre of my story is sci-fi, and there are a lot of fantasy elements. My story's name is 'Doomsday', and doomsday means the day that earth is going to disappear. The character is simple. L is the main character, who is greatest hacker in the world, who lives in Korea. Another character is at first, it is named as VIA agent. You'll figure out his name while reading the story. In addition, there is two organization, and that is IWC and VIA. IWC is Investigation World Center, and VIA is Vital intelligence Agency. Now, enjoy my story!


 "Pzzz... Can you hear me?" one NASA worker said.
 "Yes, what's the matter?" another NASA worker said.
 "There's some problem here. I can see that... the meteorites are coming!" one NASA worker said.
           KA-BOOSH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 "Pzzz...."
 The crashing sound was becoming louder and louder. Meteorites collided with hydrogen bomb(h-bomb) storage, and it made h-bombs to explode.

 "Breaking news. America disappeared! The international police IWC and VIA are researching..."
 The telephone is rings.
 "Hello, this is L."
 "L, this is VIA. Can you help us?"
 "Whoo, VIA calls the Korean hacker for help! So, what's the problem?" L said.
 "L, you heard the news that America has disappeared, right?"
 "Yes." L said.
 "We found out the machine in the meteorite scrap that somebody attached to it. We have a lot to investigate, so can you find out what is this?" VIA agent said.
 "O.K, but I have to get that machine thing in order to investigate." L said.
 "Ding dong ding dong!"
 The door bell rang. L was surprised that he got the machine right after he got the phone call.
 "Post would come to your house right now. Investigate about it. I'll give you a lot of money." VIA agent said.
 "O.K. I'll find out what this machine is." L said.
 "Good luck." VIA agent said.
 The phone call was ended. L ran to the computer and plugged it to the computer. He thought 'There will be some computer virus. I have to prepare for it.', but there was none.
 It was easy to access the program. L read the program code. The program said-
       
   Program code - This program can control non-living object. When you attach it,                                                                                                  it will move as you established.

 L, the great hacker, started hacking about this program.

 He sat in chair for 5 days without eating, and finally he could find out how was the program established.

   Establishment - Go to the space for 5000000km, and speed up, and collide with U.S. h-bomb storage.

 "So, who's the maker of this system!" L said.
 He found it for 3 days, but he couldn't find it in the system. He unplugged the machine, and tried to find the maker of this machine. The stupid maker, wrote the name on the machine, but he wrote in so small. L felt really void. He found 3 days for finding one name, and it was 'on the machine'. But, he was delight that he found out the culprit, even though he had to find with the microscope.
 "Robert Ren, he's the real culprit of this case!" L said to himself.
  He recalled the VIA agent immediately.
 "Catch the Robert Ren please. He's the criminal." L said.
 "O.K, I'll do my best." VIA agent said.

 It passed one week. There's no phone call from VIA agent. He was really bored. Nothing to do. At that time, the phone call rang.
 "Hello, this is L." L said.
 "L, Robert Ren is dead. He definitely committed suicide." VIA agent said.
 "What?!!!!"
 L was really confused. He waited for the phone call for one week, and the call that he got tells you that the criminal suicide! He was shocked too.
 "Bring me there." L said.
 "I knew that you wanted to go, so go out and ride a limousine." said the agent.
 "Thank you!" said L.
 L ran to the limousine. Few hours later, he was able to come to the culprit's house. He got off from the car, and he ran to the house. He couldn't see Robert Ren alive. He was dead.
 "Oh, did you come? I'm the agent that called you. My name is Mat. Nice to meet you" the agent said.
 "Nice to meet you, Mat." L said. They shook their hands.
 "So, Robert Ren was at Korea?" L said.
 "He knew that America is going to be collapsed, so he ran to here." the agent said.
 "Mat, so why did he suicide? I can't understand why." L said.
 "I saw the letter that he wrote before he suicide, and it said that he at first did it for fun, but he was really regretful, so he decided to commit suicide. Also, there was no evidence that is murder, so it's definitely a suicide." Mat said.
 L went to look at the computer. He saw something curious in his computer. It was a timer. It said 1 hours left.
 "Mat, what is this?" L asked to Mat.
 "Where?" Mat said.
 He looked in the computer monitor, and found that it said 1 hours left.
 "I'll click this timer. I feel something strange."
 Message popped out

 Now, it's one hours left before other meteorites fall on the Korea

 "What???!!!!!!" L and Mat said in the same time.
 L didn't think about this situation. Mat and L was really surprised.
 "I need to hack this system right now!" L said.
 Click here for ending 1
 Click here for ending 2
 Click here for ending 3

8 comments:

  1. It's a good story Kang hee!!

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  2. Interesting story - Doom's Day - and using dialog as you main tool for the story shows creativity and imagination. I suggest to use names rather than letters for all of your characters. Keep up the good work:)

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  3. Wow, you should be an author! Post other stories and you will be a world star.

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